DANG!!! It's so good. The way you used perspective with the sword was really well done and it adds so much to the piece as well as the angle that you chose to begin with. And don't worry about the title. I personally think it makes it quite dramatic ^_^
He kinda reminds me of Zero from Vampire Knight. Not in color or anything, but just the expression and hair-style. Anyway, this is really cool! I love how you did the placement and colors of everything. Favorited.